Friday, February 4, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday: Double dose doubly good



(Source image: Playboy Playmates Karissa and Kristina Shannon)

Bob was tired of Janice’s complaining, bitchy ways. He was on the cusp of divorcing her when by chance he met a man in a bar who talked of his invention that turned complaining girls into wanton, greedy, cum-seeking sluts. The thought was irresistible and he bought it right there and then.

As instructed, Bob fucked Janice blind first and without question she lay down in the contraption with the promise of even more pleasure. The man’s instructions had been clear but Bob figured a double dose could be doubly good.

He was right. When he opened the lid, Janice had the body and mind of the fucktoy of his dreams. But, she also had a twin. He now had at his beck and call, two service toys ready to play.

Tennis, anyone?

Flash Fiction Friday!

11 comments:

  1. Very nice Vesta. Nothing like two cum sluts at your beck and call.

    William

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  2. William: Giggles. Well...uhm...I wouldn't really know, but I'll take your word for it. LOL

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  3. Ha ha! Excellent little story. You should read Brenda, although in her stories this grisly fate awaits (not so) innocent men.

    PL

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  4. Quite frankly the clone idea never even occurred to me, but you and Lexi have both got a nice take on that idea. Well done! Thanks for playing and happy FFF.

    -- PB

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  5. Clever sci-fi twist and no mention of tennis. Still, from the looks on the twins' faces he'll need to work on his stamina or they'll be seeking other "opponents."

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  6. Oh, what a special contraption! ;-)

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  7. I'm game. :-)

    Cheers,
    Max

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  8. Oh wow! Stepford fuck sluts! Ira Levin would have been amazed where his idea went. LOL. Great story, and what a cure for a bitchy wife.

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  9. PL: Thank you. When I get a chance I'll have a read.

    The Panserbjorne: Thank you. I enjoyed playing and will do so again soon.

    Oversexed Librarian: Yes, goodness knows where the story goes from there.

    Max: Good to know. LOL

    wordwytch: Quite the cure, yes.

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  10. Tempting Sweets: Very special. Unfortunately, I cannot reveal where they can be purchased.

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  11. An excellent story. Truly the best I have read for some time. You really matched the words with picture in that magical way, a delicious feedback loop that draws you in ever deeper.

    PL is right: you really should read my stuff, and I, more of yours... have you written other stories? (Hi PL! How are you, sweetie?)

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